16 June 2010

A Little More of the Short I've Been Working On

Again just like last time, this is an early draft so forgive any errors I may have missed in cleaning it up to share with you my loyal readers (both of you).

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The rider spurred his horse southward away from town, hooves thundering across the dusty earth. Stealing frantic glances over his shoulder he found that the massive cloud kicked up by his horse had blocked his vision of what lay behind. Sweat beading on his brow despite the cool air whipping around him, he spurred the horse harder to milk every bit of speed he could out of it. Better to kill the horse from exhaustion than to dawdle when he needed distance between him and town. Many amongst the townsfolk who witnessed his flight spoke of him fleeing like a man with the fear of God in him. He was doing just that and with good reason. I was riding behind him; and the gap between us was closing fast.

“Why you runnin’ Ray?” I taunted over the din of our horses. “What’s the hurry?”

“Twasn’t nothing personal, it was just business.” He screamed back. A smile raised the corners of my mouth. He recognized me even after all these years and that recognition had brought fear. I heard it in the way his voice went up and saw it in his eyes. He knew who I was and more importantly knew why I was here.

“I’ve been looking for you for a long time Ray, don’t make this harder than it has to be.” I said.

“I swear, I didn’t even want to do it. I told ‘em all we shouldn’t.” His voice starting to shake.

I was just beginning to grow tired of the chase when Lady Luck smiled on me, maybe she frowned at him. In either case, his horse stepped in a hole and as its leg shattered he was thrown clear. I dropped from my horse as he tumbled a fair distance away. While he lay bloodied and dazed I ended his horse’s misery with a single shot to the head. I hated to do it but there was no other way to go about it. As I stalked across the arid ground I let the spent shell fall to the dirt and slipped a new one in. I may not have enjoyed putting down the stallion but without a doubt I’d enjoy what I was going to do next.